The response that i got from Ms Abrahamson was very good because she thinks that my work is a level 3 standard, this is very promising. She thinks that i have good photos, the article is written good with the right language register in it. Things that would improve my work use more "snappy" headlines on the front cover and on the contents so that it looks more exciting to look at. Next i have to check the grammar and spelling of my article. These things will help improve my magazine as a whole.
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